Sunday, February 15, 2009

Valentine's Day Acrostic

A bit late and corny, but oh well... it was for Valentine's Day!

Visions of you
Always fill me with
Even when you're
Not in
The mood!
Ever sad
Seeing you

Darling is
All I ever
Yearn to do.

Other thoughts here: Acrostic Poetry Only
Also submitted to Monday Poetry Train Revisited 'cause I'm a bit tired and more than a bit lazy.


Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

Now I got to let my husband read this one, so he'll know what to say! I love it!

Anonymous said...

i love it! also like the use of apostrophe on your acrostic :)

Julia Phillips Smith said...

Wow! That flows better than any acrostic I've ever read.

Linda Jacobs said...

Sweet! I'd say you were a keeper!

And, yes, that apostrophe use makes the poem!

Andy Sewina said...

Clever use of the apostrophe - I love the acrostic form but would never have thought of using 'cause like that.

Dead good!

Tumblewords: said...

Yup, this could happen!

Anonymous said...

Well constructed - I would have been thrown by the apostrophe.