Saturday, October 23, 2010


Day in and day out
Bicker then as bicker now
Tiny things make her shout
Little things make him crow

Yet night brings a kiss
And morning, a kiss too
With him gone, she will miss
When they meet, a hug or two


For Sunday Scribblings


Annie Jeffries said...

Hi John. Long time no see. It's Annie formly of Scenes from a Slow-moving Train.

I like your poem. It is so real and normal, very much like my days. The bookend of a kiss, an embrace, reassures that love and affection are there, not as a habit but as an act of love and awarenenss of the other in your life.

George S Batty said...

your poetry discribes life and how it is...awesome

Giggles said...

Very authentic! Well put! Enjoyable.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

People. Funny critters. Nicely, neatly, captured.

Jae Rose said...

Very tender..perfectly crafted..Jae

ana said...

Human nature. Most curious!

keithsramblings said...

I'm sure it rings a bell with all of us!

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

lovely said..
perfect rhymes.

Jingle said...

awesome entry.
Welcome in.

MICHAEL said...


Anonymous said...

that is nice!