Sparks deep within
Ignite
Grab hold
Gone
Light seeping through
Fading
Shadows
Rest
Distant Visions
Lucent
Faces
Lost
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- John E. Tran
- I love technology (eightdawns.com), I love real estate (citywideprofessionals.com), I love to write (this blog) whenever I get the chance and I love capturing special places, things and people through photography (https://www.flickr.com/photos/jetsphotos). I love technology because it helps to improve the way we work and communicate. I love real estate because it gives me the pleasure of working with people on a personal level. I love to write because it is so therapeutic. I have to admit, my writing is erratic. I have fun playing with words and coming up with different ways to portray my thoughts. I find myself not writing as regularly as I would like. Nonetheless, I would love to write a book some day. I love photography because it helps to preserve memories that fade too, too quickly. I would love to get good enough to be featured in a gallery.
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5 comments:
i like the style of this poem
the short words hanging down add to the glimmer/faintness of the memories.
Love the way you've pared this down leaving just the fading memories!
you definitely caught the fleeting moment captured moments...
Each stanza in your poem simply, yet strongly, illustrates clarity now faded. I also like if I read just the first lines or just the last words, the feeling is still conveyed!
(Ex. gone/rest/lost)
Like the way it goes. Minimalist yet very effective..
clearly fading
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