Sparks deep within
Ignite
Grab hold
Gone
Light seeping through
Fading
Shadows
Rest
Distant Visions
Lucent
Faces
Lost
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More thoughts at One Single Impression and Monday Poetry Train
Monday, January 19, 2009
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i like the style of this poem
the short words hanging down add to the glimmer/faintness of the memories.
Love the way you've pared this down leaving just the fading memories!
you definitely caught the fleeting moment captured moments...
Each stanza in your poem simply, yet strongly, illustrates clarity now faded. I also like if I read just the first lines or just the last words, the feeling is still conveyed!
(Ex. gone/rest/lost)
Like the way it goes. Minimalist yet very effective..
clearly fading
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