Monday, January 19, 2009

Fading Memories

Sparks deep within
Ignite
Grab hold
Gone

Light seeping through
Fading
Shadows
Rest

Distant Visions
Lucent
Faces
Lost

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More thoughts at One Single Impression and Monday Poetry Train

5 comments:

floreta said...

i like the style of this poem
the short words hanging down add to the glimmer/faintness of the memories.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Love the way you've pared this down leaving just the fading memories!

OneMoreBeliever said...

you definitely caught the fleeting moment captured moments...

GeL (Emerald Eyes) said...

Each stanza in your poem simply, yet strongly, illustrates clarity now faded. I also like if I read just the first lines or just the last words, the feeling is still conveyed!
(Ex. gone/rest/lost)

gautami tripathy said...

Like the way it goes. Minimalist yet very effective..

clearly fading