Saturday, October 23, 2010

Curious

Day in and day out
Bicker then as bicker now
Tiny things make her shout
Little things make him crow

Yet night brings a kiss
And morning, a kiss too
With him gone, she will miss
When they meet, a hug or two

Curious


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11 comments:

Annie said...

Hi John. Long time no see. It's Annie formly of Scenes from a Slow-moving Train.

I like your poem. It is so real and normal, very much like my days. The bookend of a kiss, an embrace, reassures that love and affection are there, not as a habit but as an act of love and awarenenss of the other in your life.

gs batty said...

your poetry discribes life and how it is...awesome

Giggles said...

Very authentic! Well put! Enjoyable.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

People. Funny critters. Nicely, neatly, captured.

jaerose said...

Very tender..perfectly crafted..Jae

ana said...

Human nature. Most curious!

keithsramblings said...

I'm sure it rings a bell with all of us!

Jingle said...

lovely said..
perfect rhymes.

Jingle said...

awesome entry.
Welcome in.

MICHAEL said...

THE EVERYDAY'S MOMENT AND JOURNEY!!! COOL

fiveloaf said...

that is nice!