Sprinkle some stardust over me
For I want to shine, shine, shine!
Sprinkle them stardust, busy bee
It is my moment, mine, mine, mine!
Stardust falling, flake after flake
Starry eyed, I dance, dance, dance!
Stardust calling, my stage to take
Applause, applause, fans, fans fans!
A bow to stardust, twinkling above
A look up to the sky, sky, sky!
I love you stardust, nothing but love
You give me power to fly, fly, fly!
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About Me
- John E. Tran
- I love technology (eightdawns.com), I love real estate (citywideprofessionals.com), I love to write (this blog) whenever I get the chance and I love capturing special places, things and people through photography (https://www.flickr.com/photos/jetsphotos). I love technology because it helps to improve the way we work and communicate. I love real estate because it gives me the pleasure of working with people on a personal level. I love to write because it is so therapeutic. I have to admit, my writing is erratic. I have fun playing with words and coming up with different ways to portray my thoughts. I find myself not writing as regularly as I would like. Nonetheless, I would love to write a book some day. I love photography because it helps to preserve memories that fade too, too quickly. I would love to get good enough to be featured in a gallery.
20 comments:
Oh, the magic of stardust to transform life into a dream!
This is so delightfully earnest! I really enjoyed it.
The repetitions feel like dancing! I love the exuberance in this poem!
so very sweet!
playing for pleasing the moon
And welcome to Poetry Train.
Love how you transformed ephemeral stardust into a personal flight. Great!
So sweet!
I've popped over here from Linda Jacobs' blog. I had a friend from film school (Ryerson, actually) named John Tran - how weird is that?
I want to stardust now!
oooh, like a song, what a fun read!
BTW, I linked this post to poetry train. You hasd forgotten to leave the link.
very nice! i picture a sparkly person on stage!
Your poem feels like child's play-- full of big dreams and magic wishes. Well done.
So exuberant--makes me feel like dancing!
I wish I could fly, fly, fly!
I have two images with this poem,one of snowflakes falling and the other of a star on stage! I really enjoyed reading your Stardust, thanks.
Your energy and enthusiasm is contagious! Here via Poetry Train.
I Want to Hold Your Hand
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your 15 minutes of fame are being used well in this poem!!
thanks for this--nice to see you here on OSI!
ha this one is a lot like a song lyric.. I can imagine it being sung... I turn my poems into songs sometimes. Nice one
Cheers
Luke @ WordSalad
(mine are here-
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/28/160/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/16/alice/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/11/10/epithet/
real fun reading this!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/23/happy-thanksgiving-awardstreats-4-you/
Thanks for the love 4 potluck.
Happy Wednesday!
awards/treats for you.
I love the imagery and the energy and the longing.
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