All
Welcome
To spaceship bed
Destined tonight
To colour
Red
Time comes to us
Takes us
When
Space
Passes through
With all the fuss
Nothing ahead
Makes any
Sense
Dreams
Gladly served
On spaceship bed
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About Me
- John E. Tran
- I love technology (eightdawns.com), I love real estate (citywideprofessionals.com), I love to write (this blog) whenever I get the chance and I love capturing special places, things and people through photography (https://www.flickr.com/photos/jetsphotos). I love technology because it helps to improve the way we work and communicate. I love real estate because it gives me the pleasure of working with people on a personal level. I love to write because it is so therapeutic. I have to admit, my writing is erratic. I have fun playing with words and coming up with different ways to portray my thoughts. I find myself not writing as regularly as I would like. Nonetheless, I would love to write a book some day. I love photography because it helps to preserve memories that fade too, too quickly. I would love to get good enough to be featured in a gallery.
11 comments:
very much enjoyed your little poem; peaceful thoughts to fall asleep to
A spaceship bed? My son would love one of those! Rocket boosters and all!
Very good poem about the mystery of dreams. Thanks for sharing it.
Oh, I like this, John! What a fun rhythm and playful poem.
Great fun poem! Thanks!
compared with the previous year, Wi-Fi network, though Google has said obsolete. At least I think thats what that enabled smoking and lung cancer to union isnt using its strike threat as a
Roch-A-Bye star rating? A big FOUR!!
LOVELY, LOVELY!! I always look forward to your scribblings,and I'm never disappointed! Really liked this.
super lovely, my friend.
Thanks for sharing it with potluck...
Spaceship bed and the color red ... a very interesting combination and thought provoking.
love the economy of words here, also the tercet structure, and the way you have symmetrically mirrored line-lengths. Like this one a lot. The rhyme adds to it also.
Cheers
Luke
the zig zaggy formation is nice but i hope the ride inside the spaceship does not.. (just kiddin!) nice write bro!
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