Tuesday, November 09, 2010

Just A Poem

Just a poem I wrote for you
Much in need of perfect chords
And melody so sweet and true
Like fine wine paired to words

Lyrics escape from the darkness
To seek the glitter of your eyes
That gazed into my starkness
And sent my low a million highs

You know moments perfect to call
To heal my wounds with a touch
With open arms that catch my fall
And tell me you care and such

No gift could ever enunciate
My thoughts through and through
Just how I truly appreciate
What these verses could do

As every note falls in line
Spirit flows from a jeroboam
Cheers for a friendship so fine
With no more than just a poem

16 comments:

Olivia said...

Beautiful one Jet.. very lovely indeed.. :)

Love xx

Olivia said...

Thank you so very much for your participation at Jingle Poetry potluck... with the solid support you give to us, we are able to keep going in the coming weeks.
Blessings fly your way, hope you well. Look forward to seeing you again.
Always, your talent is recognized, keep writing.
Cheers!
xoxox

Jingle said...

thoughtfully done.

fiveloaf said...

i can sense you really enjoyed writing. good poem!

jessicasjapes said...

Very sweet and heartfelt! Your feelings come across so clearly.

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/15/i-need-him/

abthomas said...

A nicely presented piece that sums up well the enjoyment on both sides of the friendship line.

industrialarts said...

nice poem on the expression of the joy of love. good job!

The Reason You Come said...

Beautiful words and so romantic! I almost wish this had been written for me! ;)

ljm (Amias and Liquidplastic) said...

Beautiful John T .. I have miss reading you.

Shashi said...

Vry beautiful... and sad... I liked your words so much...
As every note falls in line
Spirit flows from a jeroboam
Thanks for sharing...

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

Jingle Poetry said...

Welcome to our potluck week 10, a poetry award is assigned upon submission.
Old poems are welcome …hurry up, you have 12 hours to go before we are closed.
Hope to see you there. Cheers!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-moods-feelings-and.html

claim award on my entry, #160.

Jingle said...

thanks for linking up with potluck.

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/

award/treats for you. smiles.

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/thursday-poets-rally-week-33-november-18-24/


Welcome attending poets rally week 33, link in a poem, visit 18 poets, done,
Poetry awards assigned upon completion.
Happy Friday!
Thanks in advance for the attention!
xxx

Jingle Poetry said...

Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!

End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Your support has been a delight to us, at this time of the year, We wish you all the best !

Link up a poem to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!




miss you, hope you well...

Kavita said...

Aww... This was so tender and beautiful, John!!!
I totally fell in love with that 2nd stanza... It was simply divine!!! Those unique bonds we share with those unique persons are really difficult to describe... But you have done it masterfully here in this poem!
Bravo!!!

John E. Tran said...

Thanks for all the kind words!
John.